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Have some fun with Blind Tiger Improv, featuring the cream of the crop, the best in the business, our house teams Brunch Punk and I Love Your Grandma. Only $15 at the door! And after the show is The Mixer, where any and all can sign up and play in an improv scene with one of our performers.

Local Event: Improv Spectacular

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Have some fun with Blind Tiger Improv, featuring the cream of the crop, the best in the business, our house teams Brunch Punk...

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Join Logrea Dance Academy for a spectacular 40th Anniversary Performance showcasing the beauty and artistry of dance. Experience an unforgettable evening of talent and grace at this milestone event; tickets are available now via the QR code.

Local Event: A Celebration Of Dance

A Celebration Of Dance

Join Logrea Dance Academy for a spectacular 40th Anniversary Performance showcasing the beauty and artistry of dance....

Hi Westchester families &mdash; Sarah Bonanno here. Originally from Pleasantville, Hackley alum, and now a CUNY PhD student in English, currently teaching college writing at Brooklyn College. I run <a href="bonannoworkshop.com" rel="noopener nofollow" target="_blank">Bonanno Writing Workshop</a>, a freelance writing tutoring practice for high school and college students. I'm currently working with a Pleasantville HS senior on academic writing and college prep, and figured I'd reintroduce myself more broadly as summer prep season approaches. 
 I made a free worksheet for the most common writing problem I see: a thesis that's true but too vague to argue. It walks through three tests (specific / contestable / significant) and the four traps thesis statements usually fall into.
 Free download: <a href="bonannoworkshop.com/worksheet" target="_blank" rel="noopener nofollow">bonannoworkshop.com/worksheet</a>
<a href="bonannoworkshop.com/worksheet" target="_blank" rel="noopener nofollow"></a> If your junior or senior is already mid-draft and stuck &mdash; or heading into college essay season this summer &mdash; I'm taking on a few new students. Sessions over Zoom or in person when I'm in Westchester. 
Happy to answer questions in the comments or via the website.

Free Thesis Worksheet — From a Pleasantville...

Hi Westchester families — Sarah Bonanno here. Originally from Pleasantville, Hackley alum, and now a CUNY PhD student in English, currently...

Free Thesis Worksheet — From a Pleasantville Native & Writing Tutor

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