
2. Avoid prologues. They can be annoying, especially a prologue following an introduction that comes after a foreword. A prologue in a novel is backstory, and you can drop it in anywhere you want.
I am guilty of doing this. I like to put my murder in the first scene, and it's not always an appropriate start. I've been told publishers do not like prologues in general--maybe because they feel it's too much information too early so the mystery is not as mysterious as it could have been. Of course, I don't do forwards because of my genre. I think nonfiction would be more likely to have them.
I don't want the reader to know what the whole story is about, nor do I want them to know too much about one or more characters that may be in a forward. I believe in backstory however. A hint at the motive of the murder or a reaction of the players is something I do want. So because of his fame, perhaps Elmore Leonard's suggestion is something I should try more often. What do you think?
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